Mopheads by Riley Cranston - Horror, Comedy - When an upscale suburban shopping mall is under siege by a popular energy drink that turns its customers into flesh-eating creatures, the mall's fate is left in the hands of the five people who could care less: the janitors. 111 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hey, Riley

This sounds like it could be fun. I skimmed the pages to see the white space, and I surprised to see color and decorative font. I didn't have a problem with it, structure is more important but I believe it's a faux pas to alter a script in such a way.

BLB

Hey there. Any slightly new twist on a zombie movie is going to get a look from me. But i could't read it all. I think your first act is too long. 43 pages of Character setup and general banter before things start happenning. I'd cut this down. Or at least give suspenseful hints that serious shit is on the way. Good luck with it.