Dunkleosteus by Robert Stokley - Action, Adventure - An intelligent hillbilly Kevin McPharlan, faces opposition from a fishing community of Chesapeake Bay, on the Patuxent River. Conflict arises as a conniving deputy sheriff Doyle Stieber, tries to sabotage a task force assigned to rid the area of a gigantic prehistoric predator fish called "Dunkleosteus".   128 pages - pdf, format 8)

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It's really too bad the writing on display is so incredibly poor, as I do enjoy me some good old fashioned creature features.

The logline is a dead give away of what's to follow, but I actually read the entire 1st scene, which is just literally loaded with every mistake in the book - misspellings, missing punctuation, extremely awkward writing, misuse of apostrophes, character's names changing and being misspelled, and some of the worst dialogue imaginable.

Love the idea, but the writing is just awful.  

How does one even pronounce the title?