Nightstalker by Nolan Bryand - Short, Comedy, Family, Action, Adventure - The life of Nightstalker the cat is complicated by humans, dogs and the monstrous vacuum cleaner. - pdf, format 8)

Not for me.

This would be so costly to make, either you have extremely well trained pets or it has to be animated in which case it’s nothing really new. Feels like Garfield.

Lots of passive writing and grammar issues. All your lays should be lies.

Formatting is good and it is an easy read.

Good luck with it.

Thanks for the comment Warren.  I was trying to write it from the cat perspective without putting in camera directions, so that you wouldn't even have to use the cat minus the first scene.  I wanted to try something a little different with this one.

Oh okay, sorry I didn’t pick up on that. That could be quite good.