Panthera Leo by Alicia Purdum - Thriller, Crime, Drama - {no logline} 76 pages - pdf, format

New writer interested in feedback on this work

Can anyone give me some feedback? I'll be forever grateful. This script has already sold for production, but I am currently working on the final production draft.

From Alicia,

Hello! Our campaign is up, and it would mean so much to me if you could contribute.Even if you can't contribute, please just take the time to share this post. The first 3 days are most important to our campaign, so please don't put it off! You won't just be helping me, you'll be helping hundreds of people. So please share, follow, or contribute. Thank you! This was a script featured on your site that was picked up for production.

http://www.seedandspark.com/fund/panthera-leo