i've submitted mine way back but  I can't seem to find it in unproduced scripts.

I have no idea where your script is located. Have you looked on the right boards for it? http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?c-Unpro/

If you can't find it there, best thing would be to ask Don the webmaster.

As far as getting your script reviewed goes, the more you contribute by reading and commenting on others' scripts, the more members you will get to read yours. It's a quid pro quo type deal. If you do decide to read and comment on others' scripts, make sure it's something written by an active member. You can read whatever you want of course, but if you pick a script posted years ago or written by a writer who never chimed in on his or her's script, chances that you get a return read are pretty slim.

:)

Nowhere to be found. how can I ask him?

Click on this link, then click on any of the blue Simply Scripts links. Then simply send him a pm.  :)

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b=,v=portal

PM or e-mail I think.

What's the script title and genre?

kaiego is a fantasy script.

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1480777655/s-1/highlight-/#num1

This is it, right?

I found it btw by just doing a script search top right  of the main discussion page.
Been up since December. :)

I actually have since re-edited it.

Esther,

If you wish to update a script already on the site, submit it via http://simplyscripts.com/submit-your-script and indicate that it is a revision to a work already on the site.  

There isn't much I can do to get it reviewed.  As mentioned in the notification email, we don't just provide reviews of scripts submitted. There is some give and take. Perhaps taking a moment to read and write a few words on a script already on the site or asking for a script review exchange.  

- Don