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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Sci Fi and Fantasy Scripts / Death by IQ
Posted by: Don, May 25th, 2017, 4:28pm
Death By IQ by Dustin Bowcott - Short, Sci-Fi/Dystopian Drama - A couple must part when one of them fails an IQ test. 3 pages
production: 3 pages. One location. - pdf, format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: LC, May 26th, 2017, 4:54am; Reply: 1
Ooh, I like this Dustin. If anything I wanted more.
... tries to fathom what could have went wrong.
I personally would write this as: what could have gone wrong.
Great little story.