Quoted Text INT. HOSPITAL - DAY High heels footsteps in an empty hallway. They belong to STEPHANIE, 30’s, beautiful woman wearing a skirt. Her face is reddish. We can see that she has been crying. She is holding her tears. |
Quoted Text INT. HOSPITAL - DAY (END OF FLASHBACK) Stephanie is still walking in the hallway. She wipes a tear running down her cheek. She passes the lobby and leaves the hospital by the automatic doors, while a thunderstorm is raging outside. |
Quoted Text She gets up and uses her arms to sweep everything off the table. She takes the notebook and a pen and sits on her couch. She opens it to the first page. We can see a list of destinations, some of them have a line across them and we can read "NO LUCK". |
Quoted Text SERIES OF SHOTS: 1)Stephanie drops a travel backpack on her bed. 2)She puts clothes in it. 3)She changes her skirt for pants. 4)She puts on a rain jacket. 5)She takes her notebook, removes the page with her bucket list and puts it in her pocket. 6)She opens her front door and leaves the apartement. |
Quoted Text A good rule of thumb is to start a scene as late as possible and leave it as early as possible. MATCH CUT: |