Mr. Kitten by Oksana Shafetova - Short, Horror - The woman lets a stray cat in to feed and host him. Soon she finds out the cat has come to keep her from dying. 6 pages - pdf, format

New writer interested in feedback on this work

The writing isn't good enough. I stopped reading after the first paragraph. Lots of work to do. The best I can suggest is to read lots of English novels to better improve your vocabulary, and then read a few screenplays alongside a book written by one of the gurus we all love to hate once we know what we're doing.

The story is interesting, but I agree with Dustin, there are too many grammar errors, scene locations, and basic use of the English language.  From the opening paragraph, it only became more of a struggle to follow the story.

You may want to sit, re-read, re-think, and re-type this script.  It has potential, but it needs a lot of work for the reader to truly understand what they are reading.