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Posted by: Don, November 4th, 2017, 11:47am

A Dust of Snow by Jason Paul - Short, Thriller, Crime, Drama - A traveler finds himself in danger after rescuing a hitchhiker from an approaching snowstorm. 15 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: DanielW, November 9th, 2017, 6:05am; Reply: 1

Hi Jason,

I actually thought this was really good. It was an original idea - for me anyway!!
I didn't pick the twist - (I love a good twist)
It seems to flow well after the first couple of pages.

Nice job.

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