The Happy Couple by Peter Maldonado - Short, Drama - {no logline} 7 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Peter,

I tried to read your script to provide some feedback but the link says we need permission. You may want to fix that if you are looking for feedback.

Also, a logline would help greatly. That way people have some general idea of what they are going to be reading. That would also help with receiving additional feedback.

All the best,
Marty