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Posted by: Don, December 2nd, 2017, 10:56am
Sugarcane by Adam Lennon - Short, Drama - A middle-aged man travels to a storage facility to retrieve his stolen safe and soon discovers that the owner of the facility has much darker plans in store for him. 11 pages - pdf, format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Marty, December 14th, 2017, 1:04am; Reply: 1
Adam,
Heavy topic to take on.
Nice pace that builds.
I liked the action, style and dialogue.
Roosevelt was a cool character. I could picture him easily.
Nice twist. I wasn't expecting that.
Good work. Keep writing.
Best of luck to you with your current and future projects.
All the best,
Marty
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