The Trade by Curtis Threadgold - Short, Horror - An exhausted young mother is given a magical opportunity to start all over again. 9 pages - pdf, format

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Ups, I read this by mistake. I am not into horrors! But I liked the style of writing, it really grabbed me. I loved to hate Imogen and her family, so bloody patronising! Obviously, as somebody who doesn't do horror, I would like a completely different ending. Imogen's partner can turn out to be a drug smuggler, just to prove that perfect families suck. Your heroine can learn how to cope. Forgot to mention I thought your logline was good!

Solid writing here. Nice job.

Thanks. I appreciate both you taking the time to read it and the kind words.

Can’t really do anything about it being a horror at this stage though Marcela ;-)