A Thanksgiving To Remember

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Posted by: Don, December 18th, 2017, 2:09pm

A Thanksgiving To Remember by Adam Rocke - Short, Comedy - If you thought your family was dysfunctional, then you should check out Thanksgiving dinner at this home! 5 pages - pdf, format

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Posted by: eldave1, December 18th, 2017, 8:46pm; Reply: 1

Hmm.

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Well written enough - just not my kind of story. Once the first dude is offed, you can see the others coming from a mile away. Would have liked some kind of twist I guess.

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