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Posted by: Don, January 2nd, 2018, 3:28pm

Oleander by Tada Asatoorian - Sci Fi, Fantasy, Drama, Animation, Romance - When a man finds out he only has a few more weeks to live, he packs a suitcase and returns to his childhood village which was evacuated after the bombs fell on Japan. A love story allegorically told through the plant which bloomed in the radiated lands, the oleander. - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: Marty, January 2nd, 2018, 3:42pm; Reply: 1

Tada,

For starters, I would get some screenwriting software. Some free versions are WriterDuet and Celtx.
This will help with a lot of your formatting errors.

All the best,
Marty

Posted by: eldave1, January 2nd, 2018, 5:13pm; Reply: 2

Not even close to the correct format. Most of this is info available on-line - for free.

Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), January 2nd, 2018, 6:44pm; Reply: 3

Code
The villagers of a small remote town...

Villagers of a town? A village is a village and a town is a town.

Posted by: HyperMatt, February 20th, 2018, 5:47pm; Reply: 4

This first line on your script really puts one off reading further:

(SOME MUSIC TO LISTEN TO WHILE READING)HTTPS://WWW.YOUTUBE.COM/PLAYLIST?LIST=PLIBGGTSTIPGE8OSGEMUPE5-QDHAOHH5_M

And that page is not even available on YouTube when I went to it.

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