Game Hunter by KJ - Short, Action - On-grounds hunting. Collect/post Bounties. Join Public Events. Team up. But always keep an extra concealed firearm on hand. 14 pages - pdf, format

New writer interested in feedback on this work

KJ,

EXT. A HUNDRED YARDS AWAY - CONT’D
-I don't think that should be written as a slugline.
A HUNDRED YARDS AWAY
-You've already established being outside so I'd write it as action instead.

I'd remove continued from the bottom of each page.
Eliminate CU for close up and write it instead of directing it.
His boots land in the mud.
-I think we all can visualize without telling us close up.

Was CONT’D... used as a replacement for Beat or A Beat? If so, I've never seen that one before.

Keep writing and best of luck!

All the best,
Marty