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Posted by: Don, January 26th, 2018, 8:11am
My Youth by Sylvia - Short, Drama - Group of teenagers battle with the grief of growing up. 6 pages - pdf, format

New writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: EscapeVelocity13, January 29th, 2018, 10:56pm; Reply: 1
The formatting is all wrong. I would suggest finding a free screenwriting program, or if you have the money to invest in software. Couldn't get through it as the formatting was too off.

Again, get the software to format for you, and give another shot.

Keep writing.
Posted by: HyperMatt, February 9th, 2018, 6:05pm; Reply: 2
And too many camera directions. Leave that to the director and DOP.
Posted by: eldave1, February 9th, 2018, 7:55pm; Reply: 3
Sylvia: It's not even close. Take a look at a few scripts and you'll see the issues.
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