Donkey Punch by Ace Braxton - Sci Fi, Fantasy, Comedy - {no logline} 101 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Ace,

Despite the lack of a logline to indicate if I may be interested in reading your story, I took a look based solely on the title.

The opening scene lost me after nuts and dicks being shot off.

This, however, irritated me more:

"Enter the Sawyers, our main protagonists that we’re supposed
to care about the entire film."

It is condescending and lazy to the screenplay craft. ;)

A logline would be very helpful.