Unusual Inheritance by Rick Fisher - Short, Drama - You never know who you may encounter, an act of kindness could be the blessing you wish for. Being kind to the unfortunate could land millions right at your feet. 11 pages - pdf, format

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Hi Rick - this a good feel-good story, but your formatting needs a lot of work.  Formatting is important for many reasons that you'll need to discover for yourself, but if you follow some basic rules and re-do, you'll have a very good script under 7 or 8 pages.  Write on!