The Feud On Dead Lane by Robert Kirby - Drama, Crime - Two ordinary men have a dark secret that's about to be uncovered. A desperate man searches for his missing son. And a chain of events are about to start a bitter blood feud between two families, that will have brutal consequences. 126 pages - pdf, format

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KENT, JANUARY 2007,
This is unfilmable as it needs to appear in the script as.
SUPER: "KENT JANUARY 2007" usualy place a super at any point after the first line of action.
126 page count is a little too high for a spec script. Your log line is a touch too long, try to sum up the whole story without spoilers in one or two lines. Use it as an enticement to capture the interest of the reader.
Keep at it, and keep writing.