Will Of Fortune by Alan Abaza - Comedy - Down on his luck, a Taxi driver who is struggling financially sells six of his uncle's antique chairs not knowing that his uncle left him a 5,000,000 bearer bond hidden in one of the chairs. Now his mission in life is to find the chair that had the money. 117 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hey there, Alan!

Great that you posted a feature length script but not-so-great that you didn't include a log line which won't get you reads, I'm afraid.

There are so many scripts to read and so little time. I know if i'm scrolling through options to read, I'm only going to read log lines. They let me know a little bit about the story, enough to interest me. I like comedies, but just saying it's a comedy isn't gonna get a read from me.

I HIGHLY suggest that you write a 1-2 sentence log line, otherwise you might not get many if any reads.

Once there's a log line, I'll come back.

Until then,
Happy Writing!

hello Austin
thanks for your remarks regarding on my script.
when I was submitting my script it did not give me the option of writing a log line for it.
could you please help me with this. how could I write a logline for it.

thank you

I got the logline for the script , I would appreciate some feedback from you .
Thank you
ALAN ..