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Posted by: Don, May 6th, 2018, 9:43am
The Levites by Alexander B Morgan - Series, Sci Fi, Fantasy - A group of high school students discover their past lives and involvement in an immortal battle between two biblical organizations. 51 pages - pdf format
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Posted by: HyperMatt, May 7th, 2018, 3:32pm; Reply: 1
This script starts off with is what is known in reformation art as 'The Procession'. The march of Jesus and the 2 condemned to Golgotha with associated characters and mob following them. Read the first page, never read a story like this before, and got know where it is going. All the Biblical characters are introduced with another name in brackets which I presume are your contemporary present day characters. I think you need to find a more interesting way of establishing that detail. Maybe you have done that already in the pages that follow.
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