Coffee Breaks by Tracy Simpson - Dramedy - Kelly, an avid green tea drinker, Jesus art lover, and yoga student tries to “mend” (control) her makeshift family (comprised of a techie, a plus size model, her autistic-artistic brother, and her architecture student sister whose only flaw is her near-perfection). 83 pages - pdf format

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This sounds interesting. It's formatted well, although I'd break up the description sequences; some of them look like big paragraph blocks.

I'll let you know what I thought when I get round to reading it.

Very interesting read. Kelly was super dynamic with a lot of complexity that I really enjoyed. I wish Justin was fleshed out just a bit more. Gabi and Michael needed a few more meaningful interactions before the end. I would call this a beautiful comedic tragedy. A great read for sure!