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Posted by: Don, August 19th, 2018, 2:09pm
Thoughts by D Scott Mangione - Thriller - Three strangers find themselves in a mysterious place surrounded by darkness, they attempt to determine why they are there only to discover a terrifying truth. 117 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), August 21st, 2018, 2:49pm; Reply: 1
The use of a comma in the logline is incorrect and makes this a run-on sentence.
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