Predators; Hunters Moon by Mike Wilson - Action - While trying to solve a series of grisly murders a cop and a burnt out soldier discover that their city has become the hunting ground for intergalactic hunters on safari. 116 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work

I loved the first Predator movie, HATED Predator 2. Thought somewhat redeemed with Aliens Vs. Predator (did not see the sequel), and thought that Predators was an unnecessary boring rehash. Interesting to see what Black can do with this new film due next month.
Always felt this franchise was full of a lot of promise. Is your script a prequel, a sequel or a reboot?

Hi there.  New to message boards.  Script is in the same universe as the first film.  I heard a review of that film saying that it was a good war movie with an alien in it.  Wanted to try writing a murder movie with an alien in it.

Sounds like a good premise.

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