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Posted by: Don, August 31st, 2018, 3:47pm
The Revolutionary by Lee Field - Drama, Historical, War - In an untold story from the Revolutionary War, an unlikely woman turned spy is the key to securing the victory of General Washington and the American war for independence. 100 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), September 1st, 2018, 2:40am; Reply: 1
Was she French by any chance?

Read the first couple of pages and the dialogue is too OTN and expository. You need to learn the art of subtext.
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