The Reflection by Oksana Shafetova - Short, Horror - In the mirror reflection April notices a creepy shadow behind her, but the room is empty. 1 page - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Very interesting single pager.

My observation would be:

1. Can a shadow reflect? Maybe one can see a reflection of a shadow. (I'm being nit picky.)

2. The 1st paragraph consist of seven lines.  That's a lot for my eyes to chew. Try to keep paragraphs to four or less line.

CLOSING -- Very interesting sequence about fear of the shadow.

Steve