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Posted by: Don, September 23rd, 2018, 6:37pm
Get the Italian by John Iannucci - Dramedy - A mob accountant on the run must step up his plan of revenge when the ski resort town he is living in is exposed. 113 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: JohnI, July 15th, 2019, 1:18pm; Reply: 1
Note - this is a complete rewrite of a previous edition
Posted by: RodriguezFruitbat, July 17th, 2019, 12:02pm; Reply: 2
There's a lot to unpack in this logline, and I had to read it a couple of times to understand it. What are the most important pieces here that sell the heart of the story?

(Note: I personally suck at writing loglines)

I'll try to check the script out soon.
Posted by: JohnI, July 23rd, 2019, 11:30am; Reply: 3
Funny, I already rewrote the logline as I agree with you.
Posted by: JohnI, February 20th, 2020, 9:35am; Reply: 4
This has been updated again
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