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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Sci Fi and Fantasy Scripts / Worry
Posted by: Don, September 30th, 2018, 11:02am
Worry by Roberto Negron - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy - It's 2017 in New York City. Donald Trump is four months into his presidency, and LORENZO, a national guardsman mourning the death of his cousin OKIE, suddenly sees his worst fears about living in a Donald Trump America coming to pass when he finds himself coming to the defense of an undocumented immigrant on the subway. 86 pages - pdf format
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Posted by: HyperMatt, October 18th, 2018, 2:25pm; Reply: 1
At 86 pages, this should be in the Sci-Fi features section.
It’s Election day, 2016 in New Haven
I would show indications that there is Election Day, rather than tell the reader. Banners, voting booths etc.
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