Print Topic

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board  /  Action/Adventure Scripts  /  Yuan Fen
Posted by: Don, October 4th, 2018, 7:43pm
Yuan Fen by Mike Garcia - Action, Adventure - Alan is a retired mercenary who is hired to kill a famous killer known with the nickname of "Yuan Fen".  191 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: _ghostwriter, November 15th, 2018, 2:57am; Reply: 1
@Mike

You would benefit greatly from reading as many screenplays as possible. You will most likely develop a natural understanding of the format and pacing from simply reading. You could also consult a few format books like Dave Trottier's.  Good job getting the idea down on paper, now you need to figure out how to make it look like a proper screenplay.

Ghostie
Print page generated: June 16th, 2019, 7:01pm