Basement Decorum by M L Kennedy - Horror, Comedy - Their blind date wasn't going very well, then the apocalypse happened. 90 pages - pdf format

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I don’t know. I scanned through the first 40 or so pages and it doesn’t look like there’s too much dialogue at all. Actually looks like the perfect amount. I would recommended a title page though. You seem to have left that out.

Steve

Read the first 20 or so pages. I really like this. Great set up. Good characters and funny back and forth dialogue. Pretty impressed. I'm gonna finish it because now I'm interested.

Quoted from SAC I don’t know. I scanned through the first 40 or so pages and it doesn’t look like there’s too much dialogue at all. Actually looks like the perfect amount. I would recommended a title page though. You seem to have left that out. Steve

Most of my saved copies have a title page. I honestly don't know how I left one of of this version. Thanks for reading!

I'd just like to say that a surprising amount of people seem to check out this site, and this script has come THIS close to being filmed a few times now.

(it helps that it's cheap.)