Lonely This Christmas

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Posted by: Don, October 17th, 2018, 1:31pm

Lonely This Christmas by Brian McCluskey - Short, Thriller, Mystery - A seven year old boy finds the dead bodies of his parents on Christmas Day. 10 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: eldave1, October 17th, 2018, 1:40pm; Reply: 1

Interesting story. Some of the dialogue was a bit on the nose for me - but well crafted for the most part.

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