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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board  /  The Night Gallery 7 Week Challenge  /  The Scripts of the 7WC
Posted by: Don, November 3rd, 2018, 4:04pm
The Morgue Museum by Chris Bodily - Horror, Slasher, Sci-Fi, Conspiracy, Thriller, Anthology - A museum curator introduces three vignettes: A babysitter receives disturbing phone calls; a deaf audiophile cuts off people's ears to use as his own; the discovery of a lost film unravels a conspiracy. - pdf format

Gurza by Khamanna Iskandarova - Horror - 72 pages - pdf format

Gray Zone by Alexander Brauck - Horror, Psychological Horror -  A middle-aged woman re-experiences her psychological trauma when she awakes in a one room gallery with no exit and its macabre curator raises his voice toward her. 77 pages - pdf format

Glass House by Frank MacCrory - Horror - A new class of artists-in-residence arrives at an eccentric billionaire's home and discover the dark secret behind his fortune. - pdf format

Posted by: JEStaats, November 3rd, 2018, 4:31pm; Reply: 1
Four solid entries. Congratulations to the writers! I wish I could've committed the time and effort towards this challenge. Time to start reading!
Posted by: Mr.Ripley, November 3rd, 2018, 5:08pm; Reply: 2
Well that was up quick. Lol. Congrats to all. Can’t wait to read them.

Gabe
Posted by: khamanna, November 4th, 2018, 11:12am; Reply: 3
Well, thanks, Sean. I'm excited to get reading.
So it's 5 scripts, Gabe's included and I'll need to read 4. That's really nice, not many at all. And, personally, I like features more for some reason. Very cool challenge!
Posted by: FrankM, November 4th, 2018, 11:55am; Reply: 4
Thanks Sean and Don, looking forward to getting into these soon as I get done with the work stuff on this trip.

Anyone who tries to peek at my screen on the plane is going to be very sorry :)
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, November 5th, 2018, 4:37am; Reply: 5
Well done to those who entered. I'll be reading as much of them as I can
Posted by: khamanna, November 10th, 2018, 9:25am; Reply: 6
It's so warming to see people who didn't participate read the scripts. Jeff, Sandra, James - thank you so much.
Cause it's features, 70 plus pages - so you guys are great.
Posted by: khamanna, December 12th, 2018, 11:39am; Reply: 7
Gabe, time to post your script! Where is it?
Posted by: Mr.Ripley, December 12th, 2018, 1:11pm; Reply: 8
Lmao. Very soon khamanna. Had to change my entire approach on how I was going to tell the story. Will submit this with errors and all. Lol.

Gabe
Posted by: eldave1, December 13th, 2018, 12:31pm; Reply: 9
Well done here, Kham.

I won't repeat the comments that have already been made - just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this - well written.

My only minor complaint was a minor one in the opening. Gabriel is kind of pushing the action towards Banu - i.e., he wants to tell his story and baits her in. I think it a bit more compelling is she is the one pushing - i.e., she sees him staring at the painting for hours or something - finally, curiosity gets to her - what is this dude doing? I would even make him reluctant to share at first.

Pretty stellar job for the short time frame you had!
Posted by: khamanna, December 13th, 2018, 9:33pm; Reply: 10
@Gabe, please let know here or something. Or in PM. I'm afraid to miss it.

@Dave, thanks a lot for the read and the suggestion. It's a good one, I'll use it in the rewrite. Let's see if I'll manage one.
Posted by: Mr.Ripley, December 14th, 2018, 8:51am; Reply: 11
Khamanna

You’ll know when it’s up. I’m even considering posting it up in my works in progress section since I’ll still work on it.

Gabe
Posted by: Mr.Ripley, December 17th, 2018, 3:26pm; Reply: 12
Expect something by the end of the week in the my works in progress section. Not all of it but something lol.

Gabe
Posted by: khamanna, December 17th, 2018, 9:43pm; Reply: 13
You playing us, Gabe! Nice build up actually. I'm for one very curious what you have in there.
Posted by: Mr.Ripley, December 18th, 2018, 11:59am; Reply: 14


See how serious I am lol.



Gabe
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