Chase by Ishan Parikh - Action, Adventure, Spy Triller - Neal Chase, A rogue CIA agent who's been off the grid for years, is forced on the run again when the his former partner finds him.  154 pages - pdf format

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At 154 pages, this seems a bit long, does it need to be this long? It might put people off reading it

With the general rule of thumb of 1 page for 1 minute - this is about 2 and half hours long