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Posted by: Don, November 29th, 2018, 9:08pm
Looking For Better by Joseph D. L. - Family, Drama, Light Comedy - After ascending the corporate, a young is called back to the family she left behind. 93 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: HyperMatt, December 3rd, 2018, 8:28am; Reply: 1
I would take another look at that logline. It does not seem to make sense.

And get rid of that list of characters on the first page.
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