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Posted by: Don, November 30th, 2018, 11:28am

Syke by Marcus Walton - Short, Drama - When letting the wrong ones near you, fear you. 5 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: eldave1, December 1st, 2018, 11:00am; Reply: 1

Marcus - a bit of a choppy start.

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INT. CHEWY’S PRISON CELL - NIGHT

A face pops on a I-Phone.

His name is SYKE he is talking to someone in the background,
before he turns to acknowledge who he is talking to.
Chewy holds the phone in his hand.

- Give us some description of the cell

- Some description of your characters - age at a minimum.

- CHEWY needs to be intro'd in CAPS before he speaks

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