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Posted by: Don, January 11th, 2019, 1:29pm
Genesis by Nate Zegue - Drama - After a young man creates an artificial intelligence program, his life spirals out of control and the program he designs helps him regain control. 37 pages - pdf format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: HyperMatt, January 11th, 2019, 5:52pm; Reply: 1
INT. Ukraine - Hospital Room – Day
should be
INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY
You could indicate it is in Ukraine through a subtitle, like
SUPER: UKRAINE.
Posted by: eldave1, January 11th, 2019, 6:55pm; Reply: 2
A young girl is sitting next to the bed of her father who is suffering from cancer.
Characters need to be CAPPED when first intro'd. In this case YOUNG GIRL and FATHER.
So - in just your first 1/5th of your opening page you have some very basic mistakes. Do a little research on script format - read some scripts, etc. and you will pick it up.