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Posted by: Don, January 16th, 2019, 5:16pm

Captives by Aaron Ridenour - Horror - A determined young girl helps a gifted ex-con and his hemophiliac daughter escape from a home of female vampires after a heist goes terribly wrong. 106 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: eldave1, January 16th, 2019, 8:34pm; Reply: 1

Aaron - had time to read the first ten. Pretty solid writing. You got skills.

Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), January 17th, 2019, 9:51am; Reply: 2

I read first 5 yesterday and was also impressed, but didn't have time to go into any detail.

If I do get some time, I will...and I may even attempt to read the entire thing.

Posted by: Busy Little Bee, February 15th, 2019, 5:09pm; Reply: 3

Hey, Aaron

There is a lot to chew on in that premise, so many directions it can take. I love irony in a premise. I must admit the fact that eldave and dreamscale both are praising this peeked my interest. Definitely going to take a look at this as well.

BLB.

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