Surviving Susan by Major Wu - Action, Adventure - A pair of college roommates must go on the run from an angry mob consisting of their classmates wants one of them dead. 82 pages - pdf format

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Just a question... are you sure this is your final draft? If yes, have you double/triple checked it for typos?
Are you producing this by yourself? If not what about character intro and cam angles?
So many -ing, begins to, is about to...
The rights for all those songs you re using.. will cost you at the very least... two full avatar sequels.
Maybe it's just me.. for the first ten pages..