SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Horror Scripts / Boys Boarding School Massacre
Posted by: Don, March 17th, 2019, 4:34pm
Boys Boarding School Massacre by Peter Zaragoza - Horror, Gay, Campy Comedy - A horror, Gaysploitation film chock-full of scantly dressed schoolboys, campy humor, and some genuine frights. The boys of La Cruz Boarding School are terrorized by a bitchy, seven-foot nun and a crazed Grim Reaper swinging his scythe of death. 93 pages - pdf format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Busy Little Bee, November 18th, 2019, 12:07pm; Reply: 1
Hey, Peter
I'm not sure you need this in the log line.
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A horror, Gaysploitation film chock-full of scantly dressed schoolboys, campy humor, and some genuine frights.
I think the assigned genres and second sentence cover it. Also, some people are wary of reading the passive voice becuase it can be an indicator of narrative description that gives the impression of passivity, telling rather than showing. I've never come across this twist on the genre so there's plenty of opporunity for someting different, which is intriguing.