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Posted by: Don, March 21st, 2019, 4:34pm
Dear Reverend by Tshiama Nambombe - Play, Comedy - Perennials Church's faith tainted with capitalism ruining the vulnerable, taxing the poor and its pressures of the modern world. Braced in by fossilised traditions and anti-homosexual stances promiscuous exposes the hypocrisy of the New Pentecostal church. 120 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: Marcela, March 27th, 2019, 6:01pm; Reply: 1
LOL, this is hilarious! I'm not mad about the log line as it reads like some kind of anti-religious slogan but I'm glad I started reading.
I know nothing about a format of a play so I can't comment on that.
I've read 13 pages and enjoyed the subtle humor, the reverend versus laptop is just so funny!
A typo at the top of the page 8 - HIRE should be HIDE.
I'm hoping to be able to read more later on,
Marcela
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