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Posted by: Don, March 21st, 2019, 4:35pm
Conviction by Joseph Smugeresky - Thriller - A self-assured F.B.I. agent arrives in a small town to aid in the investigation of dead children. He and a female detective, who holds a personal connection to the murders, struggle to find the killer. 104 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: Marcela, March 24th, 2019, 4:30pm; Reply: 1
Hi Joseph,
I got intrigued by the log line so I started reading. I have to admit that the first scene put me off - a purplish leg sticking out of a skip... ! I would much rather get to know some of your characters first, see them doing something unusual and get hooked that way! I'm hoping to get back to yours script and read some more!
Marcela
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