The California Heist by Scarlett Fox - Thriller - Two female inmates escape a California prison one night after killing the night watchman and robbing a bank. They check back into the prison after the heist. They're soon paroled and con't to rob banks and jewelry stores. they soon land acting jobs in Hollywood making a movie. They meet some guys to date and go camping at Big bear Lake only to become malled to death by three grizzlies. 90 pages - pdf format

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Scarlett or Phil (I'm confused):

This is not anywhere close to the right format for a script.  You need to do a little homework in this regard.