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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Comedy Scripts / Peanut Butter and Jelly
Posted by: Don, May 11th, 2019, 6:02pm
Peanut Butter and Jelly by Tyriq Morrsi - Short, Comedy - A young kid who likes a girl and gives her a peanut butter and jelly. He gives her the peanut butter and jelly knowing she was allergic. 6 pages - pdf format
New writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Arundel, May 15th, 2019, 1:05am; Reply: 1
Well, I laughed........ Not sure if for the right reasons though. This was a head-scratcher, alright. Kind of like a more bizarre "Saturday Night Live" sketch or some kind of outre comedy sketch.
Is Kyle really going to address the adult as "Ashanti's Dad"?
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