The Fire Fades by Curtis James Coffey - Short, Action, Adventure - As a mysterious curse grips the land, a warrior journeys into unknown, hoping against hope to find a cure before she loses herself to it. 8 pages - pdf format

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I am not into gaming. So don't know anything about DARK SOULS as you mentioned in your title page. But I found this script interesting. Only if you could induce more emotions in the conversation between that warrior and Lauren, it will be more interesting.

Hey, thanks for the feedback, Fais. I really appreciate it and am glad you enjoyed it for the most part. I'll see about punching up the emotion.