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Posted by: Don, June 24th, 2019, 1:43pm
Spent the weekend at "Too Many Games" in PA helping the heir to the Boose fortune hype his game - Miracle Mia (Please wish list it on Steam and help get him out of my basement,) which launches in a couple of months.

I left without my computer, hence the lack up updates.

I will make it up to you.*

Don

*Let's be honest, we all know I won't...  I never learn.
Posted by: Zack, June 24th, 2019, 2:09pm; Reply: 1
No apology is needed, Don. You're the man. ;D
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, June 24th, 2019, 2:36pm; Reply: 2
No apology necessary.

Hope the game is a hit!
Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), June 24th, 2019, 2:54pm; Reply: 3
A couple of my kids are into this now. I wish him (and you) luck.
Posted by: Pale Yellow, June 24th, 2019, 4:34pm; Reply: 4
No apology needed silly!!! You work too hard already!! :)
Posted by: jayrex, June 24th, 2019, 4:45pm; Reply: 5
I've added it to my wishlist.
Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), June 24th, 2019, 4:55pm; Reply: 6
"Miracle Mia is a cute action-adventure platformer where the main heroine must fend off against an invading horde of dark beings. Mia, with the aid of her tennis racket, defend and reflect the enemy's attacks right back at them. Using the skills of tennis, will Mia be able to overcome the trials ahead?"

The first and second word in bold and underlined are unnecessary. Both sentences underlined are also quite poor. Consider this brief rewrite for now:

Miracle Mia is a cute action-adventure platformer where the heroine must fend off an invading horde of dark beings. With the aid of her tennis racket, she can deflect an enemy's attacks right back at them. Using her tennis skills, will Mia be able to overcome the trials ahead?

It still needs quite a bit of work. I'd rewrite entirely, but the above at least makes things a little cleaner.
Posted by: Philostrate, June 24th, 2019, 5:49pm; Reply: 7
No apology needed, Don.

Best of luck with the game!
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 24th, 2019, 6:31pm; Reply: 8
Hope the game kicks ass Don!  
Posted by: stevie, June 24th, 2019, 6:57pm; Reply: 9
Good luck with this, Don
Posted by: Warren, June 24th, 2019, 7:25pm; Reply: 10
Good luck to all involved.
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, June 25th, 2019, 2:50am; Reply: 11
Wow! That's great news about the game. No apologise necessarry and thanks for linking the Surrender comic!
Posted by: Don, June 25th, 2019, 1:02pm; Reply: 12
Thanks everyone for their support and words of encouragement.  Thank you, Dustin, for the editing work on the games description.  I've passed that along to my son.

- Don
Posted by: leitskev, June 25th, 2019, 1:18pm; Reply: 13
Who is this Don character? Is he new around here?
Posted by: ChrisBodily, June 25th, 2019, 10:06pm; Reply: 14
I've been largely absent, too. You don't need to apologize for anything. Life gets busy for everybody.
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