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Posted by: Don, July 7th, 2019, 7:24am
Cetaceans by Paul S. Nurkowski - Sci Fi, Fantasy - As advances in bio.robotics enable inter species communication between dolphins(Cetaceans) and human scientists, who reveal that dolphins are descended from a race of aliens and smarter than people, a powerful army of men plot to destroy the scientists' work and pirate the dolphins' ancient alien technologies to rule the world. 99 pages
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Posted by: Gerasimos, July 11th, 2019, 2:08pm; Reply: 1
Not much to say about this. Professional writing, formatting looks flawless, pacing looks good besides the slow start.
If I were you I would ditch the capitals regarding the names after the first time characters introduced and bring the action a little bit faster.
Fascinating job nevertheless.
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