Providence by Dominic Cerasi - Short, Drama, War - The Great War. The War to End All Wars. A conflict so vast it will change millions of lives forever. And in that war, a single act by a single soldier, in a tiny French village, will alter the course of history for the generations that followed. 25 pages - pdf format

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In all honesty, I truly liked this script!  The characters were believable and the setting can be visualized.  So a single act of "kindness" is what is going to alter the course of history?  I guess that's how I understand the ending.  I won't blow it for anyone else, but the simplest of acts, not coward less, but kindness, is how I read the ending.  

There are minor grammar issues, like where you speak of a an animal "hoping".  I believe it is "hopping".  Make sure before posting a script to proof read your work.  Even have someone else read it to get a second pair of eyes on it before submitting.  That's what I would do.

Either way, I enjoyed this script.  I read it to the end and it captures the struggles of two sides locked in war.  Not that this hasn't been done before, but it is a good script.