Bunnies by Ben Clifford - Drama - Twenty years after being rescued from his incestuous family as a child, a traumatized man attempts to find the twin sister he was separated from in the process. 113 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Thanks Don. Sorry I never saw this go up.

Willing to give someone else a read in exchange for feedback, as I know this is a big read.

Have a great weekend :)

Hi there Don, I wonder if we could possibly change the link for this to a new draft? Thanks :)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/qqipvlogro2pk1y/Bunnies.pdf?dl=0

Fixed.

I read this off the boards. A solid work. Heavy material...and I mean that in a good way ;)

Have you made many changes to it since I read it, Ben?