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Posted by: Don, July 16th, 2019, 10:18am
The Elevator by B.C.Nkosi - Short, Drama - A simple misunderstanding threatens to tear apart a newlywed couple. 6 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: Fais85, July 16th, 2019, 1:40pm; Reply: 1
Nice little piece. However, it doesn't offer much as a stand-alone story. It's just one of the many scenes from a married couple's life. Though, I loved the way you have woven the emotions.
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