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Posted by: Seb, August 14th, 2019, 7:47pm

Hey, I’m up for a review exchange for some feedback, I’ll ready anything. My script is a 30 minute comedy pilot and can be found here

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kw9pnFxYvIbNxEKqok-D_dRHIL1H7-c1/view?usp=sharing

Posted by: Sam, August 15th, 2019, 2:29pm; Reply: 1

Hey Seb, I'll give this a read and let you know what I think.
Did you want me to post here? I'm not sure where your script thread is.

Posted by: Sam, August 15th, 2019, 2:45pm; Reply: 2

I love it! You have a character called Sam.

Posted by: Seb, August 15th, 2019, 5:18pm; Reply: 3

Haha I have a friend called Sam (The character isn't based on him) who was freaked out that all of the characters names were the same as his distant relatives. I'll read yours if you like. Looking forward to seeing what you think

Posted by: Seb, August 15th, 2019, 7:58pm; Reply: 4

Here’s the script thread https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-shortcomedy/m-1563290314/

Posted by: Sam, August 16th, 2019, 12:00am; Reply: 5

No need to return the favour. I've nearly finished my next script, I just need to write it down.

Posted by: Seb, August 21st, 2019, 12:53pm; Reply: 6

The rewrite is here https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kw9pnFxYvIbNxEKqok-D_dRHIL1H7-c1/view?usp=sharing

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